He was just standing there. Doing nothing. Looking out but not clearly. So still the doctors had to come and check him out but they all had to leave and when they did they said the same thing, he’s dead. They put up a sign saying that if anyone knew they should tell the police but until then we’re going to have to wait. When I saw him I was scared at first so I clutched to my Mums side not wanting to look but it was pursuing me to look so I looked and it opened my mind, to everything.


“Jeff we’re gonna paint the house white.”explained Jeff”s mum.

“Yes I love white can I paint it with you!” yelled Jeff

“Sure. and were going swimming tomorrow.” said Jeff”s mum. I was so happy it was a flame,  swimming,  celebrated, white, tomorrow. We did paint our house in one day which was really hard especially the roof. And then we did the rest of it the next day and that was even harder. When we finished the house we went to the pool and I went to the deep end on the edge, and I jumped as high as I could. SPLASH!


It was a bright sunny day and Jeff was riding his bike on the bike track and next to the bike track was a river and Jeff was hoping he wouldn’t fall in there. It was green and sticky and gross. And suddenly out of nowhere a guy with a thick coat on stood in the way and Jeff started swerving saying get out of the way! And he rode down the steep hill he fell off his bike into the river face first.

He was stuck and couldn’t get out so he drowned. #sad!


He sits on my bed day in and day out, he’s a animal, he’s soft and fluffy, he’s small, I have had it since I was 4 and it was a gift from someone that passed away. It is black and faded brown and grey , he has a small tail, he has a brown collar and floppy ears and a shiny black nose. He has shiny brown eyes. This thing means a lot to me because it was given to me by my nana and she past away 3 years ago and I will keep it always…

What is it?


Work and study:

I want to learn about algebra, I also want to learn more about angles and coding.

List examples of things I could do that would show I am trying to meet my goal:

Be more attentive during the lessons we do on algebra, angles and coding, and also take more notes because sometimes I don’t take notes. And be more efficient.

Fun and friendship:

I always play games with one group of friends and should play games with other people.

List examples of things I could do that would show I am trying to meet my goal:

I could join in to their games and not just play with one group of friends.

Next year I would like to learn/get better at:

My spelling and handwriting.

A huge mistake

Hi i’m Jeff and today was bring your beaver to work day at my dad’s ,work don’t ask how I got a beaver I just have one. My dad works at a dam and he said I could come to where he works. When we got there I let my beaver go run around. Then I saw my beaver going towards the wood blocking all the water, and he started to chew the wood. Then all the water came out. As it came rushing towards us we quickly got to high ground, luckily my beaver swam towards us and I grabbed him. We quickly ran towards the car and drove home.

100WC:Cushion Scarlet Annoying Watered Violin

Scarlet was sitting on a cushion playing her annoying violin. Screeching away, trying to do the best she could ,she wanted so much to change instruments and play her favourite drums.  In bounded her dog Houndour with his tail wagging so happy to see her . He knocked over the flowers in the vase next to her and her violin got watered , dripping wet she was unable to continue with the screeching violin much to the neighbours relief! She hung up the violin and went and bashed her drums , the neighbours preferred the violin!

100wc: The concert

But then the flash made me not able to see any thing because the light from the concert was so bright! Jim was at a concert with his friend but at the end it finished with a bright flash. When he was walking to his car he still couldn’t really see anythng , he was walking into things bumbing into people and tripping over things.


He got to his car and he could see properly again but the problem was he couldn’t find his keys. He had to go back inside, go to where he was sitting find his keys and then drive home.  Thankfully the keys were in the hands of the lead singer of the band, they drove home and sang together!

100wc: The horses escape!

“kids wake up were going to luna park.”said Jeff and Bob’s mum. They both leaped out of thier bed with exitment and ate breakfest stright away had a shower, got dressed and were ready to go. It took them 1 hour to get there. When they got there they thought they start off small and go on the marygo round first.

They charged to the line and waited. 5 minutes later they are finnaly on the marygo round. the ride was starting to spin around, but half way through the ride the horses started to move. They were moving there tail then started to blink then the horses leaped of and ran away as fast as they could. They so tied of people sitting on them all the time they were forcing to get off the bars and run away, and they did.

BTN: Intervention Anniversary

This video was about Indigenous kids not being treated well and people declared an emergency about that.


A emergency can be declared when theres a natural disaster, an attack, etc. In 2007 an emergency was declared for a different reason, it was beacuse alot of indigenous kids were treated poorly so people declared an emergency about that. The Prime Minister at the time immediately sent the military and heaps more police to fix the problems such as alcohol, violence, unemployment, poor health and poor education.


Something I learnt was that you can declare a emergency I didn’t know you could do that.


A question I have is, why do they have to treat the kids bad why can’t they treat them like normal kids? And why would the goverment take their money if they dont go to school what if they can’t offord it?


click here to watch the video