100WC:Cushion Scarlet Annoying Watered Violin

Scarlet was sitting on a cushion playing her annoying violin. Screeching away, trying to do the best she could ,she wanted so much to change instruments and play her favourite drums.  In bounded her dog Houndour with his tail wagging so happy to see her . He knocked over the flowers in the vase next to her and her violin got watered , dripping wet she was unable to continue with the screeching violin much to the neighbours relief! She hung up the violin and went and bashed her drums , the neighbours preferred the violin!

One thought on “100WC:Cushion Scarlet Annoying Watered Violin

  1. Jake,
    this is my favourite entry this week. the way you incorporated the words was really natural, the way you drew on personal experience of your enjoyment of drums was really clear, and the way you thought about interesting sentence structure made the piece flow wonderfully.
    Remember these wonderful techniques when you are writing in your draft book to bring moments to life in the narrative you are writing at the moment,
    great work,
    Ant

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